Alfa Cover for magazine representing sustainable sports construction in developing countries

Bravo Looks like someone punched her in the eye.

Charlie Haha

Alfa Fair enough, I'll probably change that!

Echo The style is ok, but the message doesn't inherently say 'sustainable sports construction in developing countries' to me. For a start, why is a smiling white woman the lead image?

Echo ...also, the truck coming out from underneath the guy looks like a toy tonka truck. I would probably rearrange.

Golf Creepy!!

Hotel I understand you want to use the "new" technique of double exposure, like in True Detectiv season 2. You pasted elements that you know communicate what you want, but they don't look connected, even if you tried to do that

Hotel she looks happy about a guy having a bonner in the shape of a truck. About someone punching her in her eye, and she has a hole on her head to put coims and save some money to help african children

Juliett Really weird composition