Alfa I would change the bottom line of text to a light sans serif font and reduce to size so it's half way between the other two lines of text

Bravo The shield pattern is a little weird. Maybe if it used the lines of the bigger pieces vs the small angles

Charlie Disagree. The shield pattern is what makes it look original and crafted - without the lines it is quite generic. However, the lines will be lost at smaller scales. Agree with Alfa - typography needs work.

Delta The logo itself is really cool. But yet the type needs some work. Love the benchmark though

Echo You should find a secondary typeface for your tagline, it's too busy to be used like that especially when it's been tracked in so much. Museo is a bit generic too, maybe consider something else?