Alfa opening page to my portfolio, embossing the framin square and text, too minimal?

Bravo While the design isn't bad, try and think about your typeface pairing. Your leading isn't equidistant either. Your main type reads well in lowercase. Good job.

Charlie It's nice, not sure how many words the top line is, maybe a little more space all around

Delta The san serif type is too tall for the serif.

Echo more whitespace on the serif font needed. the nonserif font is too tall.