Alfa The nib is a little on the big dude for that strike weight.

Alfa Auto correct sucks. Sorry. On the big side for that stroke weight

Charlie Agree^

Delta I'd say either go with the pen tip OR the ink splatters. Having both gets a bit redundant.

Echo Ink splatter is very outdated design element. The pen nib is too angular - it needs to have softer form to complement the curves of the typography.